Commission: Trail of tears part 2

So... hmm... this quite is... quite something.
First things first, vision. I like the idea, of how the ground just made a little hill, just to point out the importance.
Originality? Quite impressive if I might say. Unexpected for a piece of traditional art.
Technique. No offence, but... it's missing something. It's pretty good, but it lacks some technique, no offence. The tears... look like they're part of the ponies.
Impact. Well, this one has lower impact than others, but its still there. The idea itself is quite good, but you should've worked some more on it.
Keep up the good work!