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A preview of roses are red.(edited version)Dylan ran for his life panting and gasping for air through the forest and into the moors
"great just what I need no cover" he said gasping .
As he tried to catch his breath he saw a shadow that wasn't his
"Ahhhhhh!'' He turned around screaming but stopped when he saw not the face of a killer but a young woman she was only 18 maybe 19  by the looks of her .
"Hello" said Dylan as she helped him stand up ,
When he straightened himself up he noticed how tall he was compared  to her she looked 5'feet  at most.
"Hello are you alright ?"she asked  
"Oh yeah ,nothing to worry about"  he sai
An old poem of mine that I found.Roses in the meadow hope,love and joy.
Happiness is more powerful than the storms.
When the storms moves away it brings hope for  for a brighter day.

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Her muzzle looks weird.
Time start to finish: 30 minutes
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Critique by ~Hahli1994 Jan 21, 2013, 12:06:35 PM
This is a cute expression you've made for Luna :). I see you incorporated shadows into the picture, how you outlined the face in a darker shade makes the light source seem to be coming point face on. I would suggest practicing this shading technique. Look around deviantart for tutorials on complex shading and light sources to improve your work. Adding two or three more shades of a darker color around the face will add a more realistic feel to it (the more layers the better). Once again the lining seems a bit choppy and I can nee little bits of lines around the mane that were not erased and lines that overlap like around the ears which can be fixed up with an eraser. However, overall the picture seems to show your improvement of technique.
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