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Newbie artist training ground day 5

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Day 5: Draw a filly or colt
I might make her an adoptable,I haven't decided yet.
She is a longma
Image size
2106x1463px 1.54 MB
Make
Canon
Model
CanoScan LiDE 200
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First things first. Overall, I like the idea and the image. But unfortunately, there are some buts.
Advice, from what I know from a friend: do only the lineart, and digitally color it. It should be more work to do, but also more professional.
Sorry for the low mark at technique, but can't help it. Don't be mad at me.
Vision and originality? Great! That tail made me wonder about her origins. Dragon/pony? Anyhow, great idea!
Impact? As much as it is traditional art, the whole drawing can really catch someone's attention. Don't know why, don't know how. But it does.
Overall, great job!